Dialogue (assignment)

The last line was cut off…
It’s suppose to be the wife saying okok, im sorry.

One Response to Dialogue (assignment)

  1. While the lines are authentic, they contain too much Singlish and that makes it sound ‘forced’. The conversation seems very one sided with only the ‘father’ character making his point heard.

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