“I always have this dream. Running down the aisle of the church with perspiration trickling down my cheeks, I fell and wakes. I don’t know what the dream wants from me. Harassed,I tried not to sleep for weeks. Then dark circles formed around my eyes. I am going bonkers.”
“Nina have a habit of throwing toys everywhere. Whenever I walk into her room, I will scream as half of the time my foot will land on one of her toys. Toys occupies ninety percent of her room. I hope one gets injured when they are going into her room.”
“My mother is the pillar of strength in my life, she holds up the sky in my life. Working like a bull which she doesn’t mind, she does things for the benefit of us. Waking 6 in the morning and sleeping late at night, i really feel pitiful for her.”
“ Friends are a source of strength and maybe even hope. Betty is my best friend, the light of hope in my life. After her death, I was devasted and lost. Living in complete darkness, I cried a lot but then i grew stronger after several months. I miss you, Betty.”
“Life have been kind to Benny. Living on this world for eighteen years, he have never lifted a finger to do chores. Luck finally runs out when he receives a letter from National service. I hope that he can pull through though i know it will be tough on him…”
Do take note of your sentence structure as well as tenses when you write. These factors have an overall impact on the meaning and a reader’s enjoyment of the stories. I enjoyed story no. 4 best.
PEI YI I LIKE NUMBER 1 AND I DONT KNOW WHY